Hi,
I liked this a lot, but felt that it lost drive at the choruses as the mix
became rather sparse. Phil might be on to something with the idea of
adding
a guitar part - some simple power chords might just add the slam factor.
I've really enjoyed listening to your stuff, so please keep sharing.
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From: ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]
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Behalf Of Phil Muir
Sent: 04 February 2010 21:45
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Subject: [ddots-l] Re: Corrected URL: Re: Re: Brand new remix of an old
80s
track
Darren, we both love this! Sarah is really into dance music and wanted to
crank this up but, was concerned that she may wake up baby Luke. Sarah
felt
that the descant vocal harmony needs to make an appearance at some point,
and we both felt that the tune tailed off a bit too much at the end. We
were both waiting for it to kick back in. BTW, not saying that it does
but,
if you felt this tune required a bit of funky guitar then, give me a
shout.
Would do that just for the heck of it. Great job!
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Subject: [ddots-l] Re: Corrected URL: Re: Re: Brand new remix of an old
80s track
Aah, this one works. Thanks Darren. Listening now!
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[mailto:ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]On Behalf Of Darren H
Sent: 04 February 2010 21:25
To: ddots-l@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [ddots-l] Corrected URL: Re: Re: Brand new remix of an old 80s
track
Hi folks.
Really sorry about that.
The URL is...
http://www.darrenhartland.com/songs.html
Cheers
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Tommy Win" <tommy@xxxxxxxxxxx>
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Sent: Thursday, February 04, 2010 9:21 PM
Subject: [ddots-l] Re: Brand new remix of an old 80s track
Me too!
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From: "Gordon Kent" <dbmusic@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
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Sent: Thursday, February 04, 2010 3:02 PM
Subject: [ddots-l] Re: Brand new remix of an old 80s track
Same here.
Gord
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From: "Darren H" <darren@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
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Sent: Thursday, February 04, 2010 2:10 PM
Subject: [ddots-l] Brand new remix of an old 80s track
Hi folks.
I'm working on a club version of Duran Duran's Girls on film. It's
probably about 90% finished now, but I thought I'd upload it for you to
get a listen.
www.darrenhartland.com/song.html
Just click the play button on the flash player.
I've still got the middle instrumental section to finish as I'm not
happy with it. I've also got the last choruses to fill out.
Also, while you're listening, are there any time issues. Someone said
that the high hat appeared to be dragging slightly. I can sorta hear
it, but I don't know if that's because I was told it was so that's what
I'm hearing.
Any thoughts, criticisms or ideas to finish it off would be really
appreciated.
Cheers
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