Hi Kris I heard both mixes through my headphones and I could tell which one was which just by the auto tune. version 2 was the original because everything was more present in the mix such as the people saying the heys in the korus and the crash with the delay and the vocals were more spaced out. Your mix needed to be more balanced. What I noticed was that the vocals were coming up more towards the end when they should of stayed at the same level and the crash should have been brought up more as for the high-hat parts but other than that good job for not knowing about Hip-Hop.