Walter,
This sentence in 6a is still limping:
"The simulation platform convolves the impulse response returned by Rx1's
AMI_Init in step 3 by the output of step 5 and is presented to Rx2's AMI_Init
function"
The "by" should probably be "with", and the other red words
should be changed to something like "and presents the result to"...
Please fix.
Thanks,
Arpad
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From: Walter Katz [mailto:wkatz@xxxxxxxxxx]
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Subject: RE: [ibis-macro] Re: Submission of BIRD 166.3 to the IBIS Open Forum
Arpad,
Thanks for the comments. I fixed the spelling and missing word, and decided to
change the format to change this to that. It now clearly denotes the change.
Also in steps 7a and 7b I change the references to step 6 to step 6a and step
6b.
Walter
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Subject: [ibis-macro] Re: Submission of BIRD 166.3 to the IBIS Open Forum
Walter,
If it is not too late yet, I would like to request a few spelling/grammar
corrections
before this is submitted to the Open Forum.
In the title change "bellow" to "below".
Something is missing in step 6a in the red area:
"The simulation platform convolves the impulse response returned by Rx1's
AMI_Init in step 3 by the output of step 5 is presented to Rx2's AMI_Init"
In step 7a, change "step 6 to obtained" to "step 6 to obtain".
Thanks,
Arpad
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Subject: [ibis-macro] Submission of BIRD 166.3 to the IBIS Open Forum
Mike,
This is a formal submission of BIRD 166,3 to the Open Forum.
The BIRD now corrects the statistical flow. There are no changes to the time
domain flow.
Walter
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