Hi folks. Following the feedback from the kind folks here, plus feedback I received offlist, in particular from Dawn, my partner, I've made some quite big changes to the track. I basically stripped everything right back to the vocals, drums and bassline and started again. I think the result is much cleaner even though I prefer the kitchen sink production, I'm just that way inclined, I guess it's being a child of the 80s where they used to throw as much into a track as they could fit in. http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/the-model-demo <blocked::http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/the-model-demo> I'd be interested to hear if you think it's improved. Cheers Darren