[ddots-l] Re: Folowing List Feedback: The Model cover version

  • From: "Tim Burgess" <tim@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • To: <ddots-l@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Wed, 18 Aug 2010 14:30:03 +0100

Much nicer - yum.  The only comment I would make is that the string-ish
sound that takes the melody in the chorus sounds a little too dry to sit in
the mix, but that's nit-picking, as I really like the stuff you're doing.

 

Best wishes.

 

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From: ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On
Behalf Of Darren H
Sent: 18 August 2010 09:51
To: ddots-l@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [ddots-l] Folowing List Feedback: The Model cover version

 

Hi folks.

 

Following the feedback from the kind folks here, plus feedback I received
offlist, in particular from Dawn, my partner, I've made some quite big
changes to the track.

 

I basically stripped everything right back to the vocals, drums and bassline
and started again.

 

I think the result is much cleaner even though I prefer the kitchen sink
production, I'm just that way inclined, I guess it's being a child of the
80s where they used to throw as much into a track as they could fit in.

 

http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/the-model-demo
<blocked::http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/the-model-demo> 

 

I'd be interested to hear if you think it's improved.

 

Cheers

Darren

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