Much nicer - yum. The only comment I would make is that the string-ish sound that takes the melody in the chorus sounds a little too dry to sit in the mix, but that's nit-picking, as I really like the stuff you're doing. Best wishes. Tim Burgess Raised Bar Ltd Phone: +44 (0)1827 719822 Don't forget to vote for improved access to music and music technology at <http://www.raisedbar.net/petition.htm> http://www.raisedbar.net/petition.htm From: ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:ddots-l-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Darren H Sent: 18 August 2010 09:51 To: ddots-l@xxxxxxxxxxxxx Subject: [ddots-l] Folowing List Feedback: The Model cover version Hi folks. Following the feedback from the kind folks here, plus feedback I received offlist, in particular from Dawn, my partner, I've made some quite big changes to the track. I basically stripped everything right back to the vocals, drums and bassline and started again. I think the result is much cleaner even though I prefer the kitchen sink production, I'm just that way inclined, I guess it's being a child of the 80s where they used to throw as much into a track as they could fit in. http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/the-model-demo <blocked::http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/the-model-demo> I'd be interested to hear if you think it's improved. Cheers Darren