Wow! Completely changes my perspective on the tune... Much more tension and a much darker feel. As I could better understand the lyrics my attention was riveted to the story line... And, it has a much more ominous nightmarish sense like SoftSell, my favorite group of that era... Nick ----- Original Message ----- From: "Darren H" <darren@xxxxxxxxxxxx> To: <ddots-l@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Wednesday, August 18, 2010 3:50 AM Subject: [ddots-l] Folowing List Feedback: The Model cover version > Hi folks. > > Following the feedback from the kind folks here, plus feedback I received > offlist, in particular from Dawn, my partner, I've made some quite big > changes to the track. > > I basically stripped everything right back to the vocals, drums and bassline > and started again. > > I think the result is much cleaner even though I prefer the kitchen sink > production, I'm just that way inclined, I guess it's being a child of the > 80s where they used to throw as much into a track as they could fit in. > > http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/the-model-demo > <blocked::http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/the-model-demo> > > I'd be interested to hear if you think it's improved. > > Cheers > Darren > PLEASE READ THIS FOOTER AT LEAST ONCE! To leave the list, click on the immediately following link: ddots-l-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx?subject=unsubscribe If this link doesn't work then send a message to: ddots-l-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx and in the Subject line type unsubscribe For other list commands such as vacation mode, click on the immediately following link: ddots-l-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx?subjectúq or send a message, to ddots-l-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx and in the Subject line type faq