We spent most of the time in the ATM teleconference today reviewing the
BIRD189.5_draft16_v3.docx file I distributed last Friday. We made a few live
editorial changes, and added a few comments with questions on proper
wording. The attached document is the result of all that work, which should
be further discussed in the Interconnect Task Group meeting tomorrow.
Thanks,
Arpad
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[mailto:ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Muranyi, Arpad
Sent: Friday, January 19, 2018 4:44 PM
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Subject: [ibis-interconn] BIRD189.5_draft16_v3
Hello Everyone,
Attached is BIRD189.5_draft16_v3 for all to review.
In this version "Text from Arpad goes here" was replaced by real text, to
explain the 2nd drawing of the Aggressor_Only illustrations. The caption
of the 2nd drawing was also changed and a few other minor spelling errors
elsewhere.
I believe the plan is to discuss this draft in the upcoming ATM teleconference
next Tuesday. Please be prepared with comments if you have any.
Thanks,
Arpad
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[mailto:ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Mike LaBonte
Sent: Friday, January 19, 2018 11:25 AM
To: ibis-interconn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:ibis-interconn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: [ibis-interconn] BIRD189.5_draft16_v2
Two documents are attached:
* BIRD189.5_draft16_v1.docx has edits made by Walter Katz, as agreed
previously. These edits fix several instances of "Terminal_type", add "Ext_ref"
where needed, and correct "signal_names" to "terminals" in one place.
* BIRD189.5_draft16_v2.docx contains further changes made during the
Interconnect Task Group meeting today:
* Addition of spaces to separate words "moreInterconnect" and
"columnbut".
* Remove a comment calling for a change that has already been made.
* Change "Node 0" to "node 0".
* Insert new "Aggressor_Only examples" figure and associated sentence to
introduce it.
* Insert new "Aggressor_Only example" figure using two [Interconnect
Model]s from Arpad and a placeholder for the paragraph to introduce it.
* Insert syntax examples 13 and 14.
Arpad will use BIRD189.5_draft16_v2.docx as the basis for
BIRD189.5_draft16_v3.docx, which will add a paragraph explaining the second new
figure. With these changes it seems likely we will have a viable BIRD189.5 to
submit, barring any other specific changes recommended by people after personal
review.
Mike
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