[ibis-macro] Re: [ibis-interconn] BIRD189.5_draft16_v4

From: Mike LaBonte <mlabonte@xxxxxxxxxx>
To: <ibis-interconn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>, <ibis-macro@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Wed, 24 Jan 2018 10:27:50 -0500 (EST)

I would like to take a stab at a bullet item that we felt might need
rewording, but also the one before it:

My suggested change would be:

For ease of reading here is the result without markup:

Mike

From: ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
[mailto:ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Muranyi, Arpad
Sent: Tuesday, January 23, 2018 4:10 PM
To: ibis-interconn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx; ibis-macro@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [ibis-interconn] BIRD189.5_draft16_v4

We spent most of the time in the ATM teleconference today reviewing the

BIRD189.5_draft16_v3.docx file I distributed last Friday.  We made a few
live

editorial changes, and added a few comments with questions on proper

wording.  The attached document is the result of all that work, which
should

be further discussed in the Interconnect Task Group meeting tomorrow.

Thanks,

Arpad

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From: ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
<mailto:ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
[mailto:ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Muranyi, Arpad
Sent: Friday, January 19, 2018 4:44 PM
To: ibis-interconn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:ibis-interconn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> ;
ibis-macro@xxxxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:ibis-macro@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: [ibis-interconn] BIRD189.5_draft16_v3

Hello Everyone,

Attached is BIRD189.5_draft16_v3 for all to review.

In this version "Text from Arpad goes here" was replaced by real text, to

explain the 2nd drawing of the Aggressor_Only illustrations.  The caption

of the 2nd drawing was also changed and a few other minor spelling errors

elsewhere.

I believe the plan is to discuss this draft in the upcoming ATM
teleconference

next Tuesday.  Please be prepared with comments if you have any.

Thanks,

Arpad

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From: ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
<mailto:ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
[mailto:ibis-interconn-bounce@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Mike LaBonte
Sent: Friday, January 19, 2018 11:25 AM
To: ibis-interconn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:ibis-interconn@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: [ibis-interconn] BIRD189.5_draft16_v2

Two documents are attached:

*       BIRD189.5_draft16_v1.docx has edits made by Walter Katz, as agreed
previously. These edits fix several instances of "Terminal_type", add
"Ext_ref" where needed, and correct "signal_names" to "terminals" in one
place.
*       BIRD189.5_draft16_v2.docx contains further changes made during the
Interconnect Task Group meeting today:

*       Addition of spaces to separate words "moreInterconnect" and
"columnbut".
*       Remove a comment calling for a change that has already been made.
*       Change "Node 0" to "node 0".
*       Insert new "Aggressor_Only examples" figure and associated
sentence to introduce it.
*       Insert new "Aggressor_Only example" figure using two [Interconnect
Model]s from Arpad and a placeholder for the paragraph to introduce it.
*       Insert syntax examples 13 and 14.

Arpad will use BIRD189.5_draft16_v2.docx as the basis for
BIRD189.5_draft16_v3.docx, which will add a paragraph explaining the
second new figure. With these changes it seems likely we will have a
viable BIRD189.5 to submit, barring any other specific changes recommended
by people after personal review.

Mike

References:
- [ibis-macro] BIRD189.5_draft16_v4
  - From: Muranyi, Arpad

[ibis-macro] Re: [ibis-interconn] BIRD189.5_draft16_v4

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