It is pretty good, I really like the affects you put into it!But I think on the slides you should put that affect that they use in rap/pop songs now a days, the sound that will really make those slides sound mechanical... I also think you should move the track that is moving in circles there at the end either up an octave or add something moving along with that circle sound that will give the high pitched sound. But great job! Sorry for not perfect explanations, I'm not sure what things are called on Sonar because I haven't learned everything yet LOL! But I'm working on it... :P
Thank you, Brandon Keith Check out MySpace: http://www.myspace.com/brandonkeithcom Also add me on facebook! brandonkeith -------------------------------------------------- From: "Darren H" <darren@xxxxxxxxxxxx> Sent: Sunday, July 18, 2010 9:37 AM To: "Dancing Dots List" <ddots-l@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Subject: [ddots-l] New Track uploaded - On Broadway
Hi folks. I've just uploaded the first draft demo of a track I've been working on. It's a cover of the George Benson classic, On Broadway. I'm sure he'd hate it, but I've had a lot of fun recording it so far. http://soundcloud.com/the-karmistry-project/on-broadway-demoI've used Stylus RMX, Trilian, Omnisphere and the VP-550 in this recording.Needs a little more variety in the drum track, but I'd say it's 90% done.I'd love to hear your thoughts good or bad. It certainly won't be everyone's cup of tea, Dawn, my partner hates it with a passion.Cheers DarrenIf you like electronic, ambient, new age or atmospheric music, become a fan of The Karmistry Project on Facebook...http://facebook.karmistryproject.com You can also follow Karmistry Media on Twitter... http://www.twitter.com/Karmistrymedia PLEASE READ THIS FOOTER AT LEAST ONCE! To leave the list, click on the immediately following link: ddots-l-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx?subject=unsubscribe If this link doesn't work then send a message to: ddots-l-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx and in the Subject line type unsubscribeFor other list commands such as vacation mode, click on the immediately following link:ddots-l-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx?subject=faq or send a message, to ddots-l-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxx and in the Subject line type faq
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